J. Haux

Which Pat are we talking about?

Welcome! Can't talk very long. Hope to see you around! ~Jacquie~

My name's Jacquie! Hi and welcome to YWS! I love reading, too. I hope you like to write. :D See you around!

Hi! Hello! Welcome--I don't know why I didn't see this yesterday--again, from me! I'm Jacquie. You can call me that...if you can remember. :wink: I thought you might be from ...

Really cool!!! I'm glad I saw this. The detail and the shading...and the mood you captured. *contented sigh* It's not often you see that. Aren't you happy with it? :D ...

I'm making a note to myself to come back here later and add my review on this post ( Invictus , orb, shepard king 'storybook')

^likes Draco...a lot. :D

Oh, welcome, welcome, welcome! I'm Jacquie. I'm fairly new, but I'm on here a lot...too much (this site is addictive), so if you need anything feel free to PM me. ...

Don't you think that's a nice name for a man or woman?

Do you think any of us would want to change our names to Pat?

you could say that what am i doing?

What if no one did a study at all?

Okay, and my point all along was... If he already found it, why is he still looking? Or: unless you mean something else, those two sentences are a discrepancy, for ...

Suggestions on a title? You don't need one. At least, not now. The best time to worry about a title is at the end, when you've written everything down and ...

Okay, let me try to explain. Your first few stanzas are in present tense. The character is talking to the reader, as if he's about to tell about something that ...